Showing posts with label Rumer Haven romance novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Rumer Haven romance novel. Show all posts

September 4, 2016

Madness to the Method, Part 2: The Outline

In my previous post, "Madness to the Method, Part 1: The Brainstorm," I discussed how all of my stories originate from a very sloppy, scattered place: my brain. And the only way to get them out of my head is to kick up a windstorm in there and blow the ideas out onto paper like so much debris. At some point, though, these ideas need to be swept up into a plot pile, which then gets tidied into a story arc.

I've written short stories and vignettes here and there ever since I was a kid, and in crafting those, I usually do just sit and write from start to finish, having a general idea of where I want to go but pretty much making it all up along the way. So when I first took a crack at writing a novel, I automatically assumed I could approach it the same way. Which, when I now think about it, was incredibly naive and insane. Writing a few hundred or thousand words is one thing (don't get me wrong, short stories also benefit from advance planning), but taking on several tens of thousands is quite another. It can become a management nightmare if you just run into such a vast and wild, unexplored frontier with all creative guns blazing and no strategic plan. So as I continued to revise my first manuscript, I had to learn the hard way that backing cohesion and proper pacing into a novel is difficult as hell, and it would have behooved me to have an outline first.

Which is what I did for my second manuscript. I gathered my miscellaneous brainstorming and started to slot it into sections. Still spastic scribblings in my journal, by no means neatly divided into tiers of A, B, C, i, ii, iii, but guidance nonetheless. This bullet-pointed bird's-eye view helped me tremendously by giving a sense of the story's shape and direction without also confining my creativity. I wasn't bound to every idea that I jotted down here, nor were any of them fleshed out enough to dictate every step of the journey. Some writers might prefer a more detailed outline than this, but I've found I personally thrive under this balance between the concrete and the as-yet abstract. The organized and the organic. That gives me the breathing room I need to let myself change my mind if the characters want to head somewhere else, and it allows for those moments of magic when, truly and almost inexplicably inspired, you just write without knowing where it's going and end up creating something better than you could've ever achieved if you'd thought about it too hard.


Giving myself over to the story this way inevitably demands script changes, then, and sometimes I still manage to write myself into a corner. I leave certain aspects open to possibility so reach the inevitable fork in the road where I must commit to one outcome versus another. And I don't always want to go with what I originally planned--or have written myself so far outside that scope that it isn't even an option anymore--at which point I'll sit with pen and paper yet again and hash it out. In the case of both Seven for a Secret and What the Clocks Know, I was closing in on the final chapters when I needed to stop, step back, and brainstorm my way through a State of the Story outline: basically, Here's where my characters are at right now. Is this where I want them to be, and, if so, what are their options from here? It became a decision tree of sorts that ultimately helped me work out the solutions (and bust through my writer's block).

Ultimately, every writer needs to find what method works best for him or her, and surely the process continues to evolve with experience. With only two novel manuscripts down, a third in the works, and a fourth largely in the brainstorm stage, I have personally learned that I will never again attempt one without some semblance of an outline and especially encourage the practice to anyone out there who is writing a novel for the first time. 

December 16, 2014


There's a SEVEN FOR A SECRET SMORGASBORD goin' on at brilliant author Jennifer Lane's blog.

Read what Jennifer thought about the book, what sparked the story and setting in me wee noggin, what projects I'm currently working on...

Aaand leave a comment at her blog for a chance to WIN A FREE EBOOK!

http://jenniferlanebooks.blogspot.co.uk/2014/12/seven-for-secret-by-rumerhaven-review.html

August 16, 2014

SEVEN FOR A SECRET Soundtrack


I listened to a lot of classical music and big band jazz while drafting Seven for a Secret, but as I rounded the corner on completion, I decided to compile the actual soundtrack that had evolved over the course of the story. The playlist I've listed below is what I played on a loop during my final revisions before querying the manuscript. Not every song or artist is an exact match to what's in the book, but for me, this compilation captures the spirit and sound of this dual-period story perfectly. (Song titles are linked to corresponding YouTube videos.)

"I Try" by Macy Gray - This circa Y2K classic is what Kate sings and sways to after moving into her new Camden Court apartment.

"Chicago Bound Blues" by Bessie Smith - Following a friend's wedding, Lon drinks his sorrows away to this song by the iconic 1920s singer.

"If You Don't, I Know Who Will" by Bessie Smith - This is the gritty, sultry blues tune that Kate hears while making love to Dexter.

"Auld Lang Syne" by Duke Ellington - There are so many versions of this song, and though this one isn't from the 1920s, it's akin to the jazzy rendition that Lon would have heard at the Aragon Ballroom.

"Squeeze Me" by Fats Waller - Another tune from Lon's New Year's Eve at the Aragon.

"Nobody Knows You When You're Down and Out" by Nina Simone - Lon listens to a live jazz band play this at the Green Mill club in Chicago's Uptown, and Nina Simone's version bridges it brilliantly to modern day. 

"You & Me & the Bottle Makes 3 Tonight" by Big Bad Voodoo Daddy - Kate doesn't have any 1920s-brand jazz in her CD stack, but the Swing Revival that was in full, well, swing by the late '90s sets the right mood as she plans a meet-and-greet happy hour for her new neighbors--her new hot neighbor, more specifically...

"Tonight You Belong to Me" by Gene Austin - Lon actually plays the original 1926 Irving Kaufman version of this sweet little ditty on his Victrola, but Austin's 1927 recording was easier to find. :)

"Cheek to Cheek" by Fred Astaire - While not referenced by title in the scene, this is the Fred Astaire song I imagine Kate playing at her Camden Court happy hour, as its lyrics lend themselves well to the "Heaven" section of the book.

"Moonlight Serenade" by the Glen Miller Band - A late 1930s classic, this one really gets the seniors two-steppin' at Kate's happy hour and suits the night-sky motif that runs through the book.

"A Room with a View" by Artie Shaw - Another 1930s staple, this Big Band song also plays at Kate's cocktail party and alludes to her voyeuristic tendency to spy on the neighbor living across the courtyard.

"Everybody Loves My Baby" by Fats Waller - Though this particular recording dates to 1940, the song is a jazz standard from 1924 and what Lon sings on his way to his Aunt Estella's house.

"Smooth" by Santana (feat. Rob Thomas) - After all the vintage throwbacks, the New Millennium had to represent on this soundtrack again, and this song totally evokes that period for me, as well as radiates the Chicago summer heat. 

"Rhapsody in Blue" by George Gershwin - A classical-jazz hybrid, this song was said to be Al Capone's favorite request at the Green Mill jazz club, and it's what Kate and Dexter hear there, too, over seventy years later.

"Tonight You Belong to Me" by The Bird and the Bee - While not explicitly featured in the book, this song plays in my mind and heart during the epilogue as the perfect bridge between the past and present story threads. It's such a sweet, modern rendition of the 1920s original, and its rippling, almost glimmering synthpop evokes a celestial, standing-in-line-for-Space-Mountain-at-Disney-World sound befitting Kate's planetarium job and all the stargazing throughout Seven for a Secret.

*BONUS TRACK*
Okay, this is a little embarrassing on two levels, but until my editor pointed out that using radio songs as ringtones wasn't really widespread as of 2000 (Embarrassment #1: My Faulty Memory), when Kate hears her cell phone go off at the end of the book, the ring was originally Lou Bega's "Mambo No.5" (Embarrassment #2: Trying to Incorporate Lou Bega's "Mambo No.5" into My Novel). Oh, whatever. Like you aren't dancing to it right now... FYI, Kate's phone is now set to the Nokia tune.

On that lively little note, thanks for jammin' with me to music both old and not-new-but-not-as-old. And now, we dance!

August 12, 2014

Calling All Flappers! Today, We DANCE!


I feel like I'm late to my own party for first posting this now, but the buildup to release day (a.k.a., TODAY!) has been such a weird and wonderful experience to savor. I'm so grateful to everyone who's been participating in the SEVEN FOR A SECRET promos and offering me support in general. I've been contacted by a lot of friends who have already downloaded their copy and started reading, so at this point, I'm just trying not to soil my knickers awaiting their reaction and the book reviews of kind strangers giving it a chance.

You can read the summary at my website or Goodreads. I suppose at this point, I should also divulge the deetz of where you can find this little sucker:

http://omnificpublishing.com/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=&products_id=154&zenid=f18021ae720b66c77098a2f28d6c9d44
http://www.amazon.com/Seven-Secret-Rumer-Haven-ebook/dp/B00MN13AK6/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1407854376&sr=1-1
http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/seven-for-a-secret-rumer-haven/1120086014?ean=9781623421090
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/22700275-seven-for-a-secret

In the meantime, I'm having a ball over at the SEVEN FOR A SECRET Facebook party! So join me and other authors over there to answer some trivia and become eligible to WIN giveaways galore! The event runs until 6pm EST today.

And you still have six days to enter the SEVEN FOR A SWEEPSTAKES giveaway for a chance to win a free ebook, Origami Owl® key charm like the key to Olive's secret, and an Anna Chocola® cloche hat so you can step out Eva style.

All right then, it's been fun beating my gums here, but I'd better ankle and get back to the FB party!


July 24, 2014

What "TO READ," What "TO READ"...


Darlings, that is my none-too-subtle way of announcing that


is already up on
  
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/22700275-seven-for-a-secret

It won't be wearing its pretty new outfit until the cover reveal on AUGUST 5th, and the official book release isn't until AUGUST 12th, but in the meantime, you can check out the book summary at Goodreads, and if you fancy the sound of it, please add it to your "TO READ" shelf!

Cheers, all!

July 17, 2014

SEVEN FOR A SECRET Blog Tour!


Well, folks, so far all is running according to sheh-jule...
(*fingers crossed*)

SEVEN FOR A SECRET is through its copy edit and pending the proofread, but the ARC is ready, the cover reveal is August 5th, and, if all goes to plan, the release date should be August 12th.

In the meantime, my publicist has put the call out for book bloggers to participate in the BLOG TOUR!
(click above for sign-up)


I know I keep saying it, but, man, things are gettin' real, yo. I am so grateful for all the support I've already received on this novel and thank everyone who's given a lil' unknown schmo like me the time of day. I do hope you enjoy the book if you read it. :) 

June 10, 2014

#amediting...not dead

My editor is so sweet and freakin' brilliant. I hope this positive sentiment that she shared yesterday lasts... :)

My apologies for the radio silence and that I haven't made it around to everyone's blogs lately. I received my first-round edits back and was curled up in my cave the past week tending to them. That was the first time I'd let myself read my manuscript in several months, and I'm so glad we had parted ways a while--made it so much easier to be a little less sentimental and therefore see and trim out superfluous narrative, as well as totally get what my editor was asking for and why. I have loved the process so far and just hope my revisions meet with her satisfaction.

I've never done this before, so my approach was to do a first-pass just making a beeline to all her comments and changes to field them one by one. I then did a comprehensive read-through as my second-pass, re-addressing my tweaks along the way to smooth them over and look for any excess I could cut out--my word count is rather long due to the fact that this book is comprised of two separate yet intertwined romances (one modern, the other in the 1920s), so to develop either adequately, some length was in order. But in general, it's my modern-day thread that has required the most work to pick up pacing and make characters more sympathetic, so for my third-pass, I did a read-through of the modern story only, further trimming and developing. And did this all in a week's time. So my mind is fairly fried, and my eyeballs are hanging from their sockets by a thread.

And now it rests in my editor's hands to do with what she will to meet our developmental edit deadline at the end of this month. Wish us luck!

Am off to become some semblance of a domestic goddess today to undo various results of my neglect... ;)



April 28, 2014

A to Z: Charleston, Charleston...


Well, huzzah and hurrah for the X-citing final week of 2014's April A to Z Blog Challenge! What an X-cellent achievement for all the A to Z participants this year, who've X-celled in X-pressing their X-pertise for nearly the full X-tent of the alphabet so far.

And I bet I'm not the only one having to make an X-ception for today's letter, which is a tricky little sucker to find an X-ample of for this blog X-cercise.

Let me X-plain: I couldn't find an X word anywhere in the 1920s slang l-X-icon. So while I can't provide an X-act fit, to suit my purposes today, "X" stands for:



~*~  CRISS-CROSS  ~*~

Josephine Baker shows us how it's done.

April 24, 2014

A to Z: The Indiscreet Elite


Condescending to join me again for the A to Z Challenge? Thank you, daaahhlings, for not turning your sophisticated noses up at my vulgar language.

The spirit of this month's theme stems from my debut novel, SEVEN FOR A SECRET, due for release by Omnific Publishing this summer. It's a half-contemporary, half-historical romance in which a Jazz Age tragedy haunts a modern woman's love life. So to shape you into the right attitude for the haughty high hats and floozy flappers of Al Capone's Chicago, let's recommence our elocution lessons with some new 1920s vocabulary, dears...



~*~  UPSTAGE  ~*~
Meaning: Snobby, arrogant.

"Everything jake? Wanna come back inside?"
"Aw, those women are so upstage, I'll never live down this run in my stocking."

A to Z: Shyeah, Right!

 
If I told you we're so close to being done with the A to Z Challenge, that I've managed to keep up with every letter of the alphabet so far, would ya believe it? I hardly can myself, but it's true--see for yourself, starting from here: A to Z: Talk the Talk for Walking the Walk.

And just to show that I'm still sticking with the program, I'll put my money where my slang-speaking mouth is with this next installment of Twenties terminology...



~*~  TELL IT TO SWEENEY  ~*~
Meaning: Tell it to someone who'll care/believe it.

"I just did the Charleston with an elephant!"
"Oh, yeah? Tell it to Sweeney."

April 19, 2014

A to Z: The Wet Blanket


In wrapping up the third week of Aprils' A to Z Challenge, I'm feeling the warm fuzzies from everyone's visits so far. Of all the blogs in all the A-to-Z world, you didn't have to pop into mine, but you did, so I hope this gin joint's been worth it. :)

Speakeasy, I mean, speaking of gin, if there's one thing to glean from a lot of this 1920s slang, it's that spirits warmed the spirit back then--significantly so, as alcohol became the forbidden fruit and rebellious young women who dared to bare more skin cloaked themselves instead in more than a lover's arms...



~*~  QUILT  ~*~
Meaning: A drink that warms you up.
"Who needs clothes when I drank a quilt?"

April 14, 2014

A to Z: You Have it Comin'...or Do You?


There's an overwhelming number of participants in this year's A to Z Challenge, so if you haven't made it over to my blog until now, don't worry. I don't blame you. I haven't gotten around to many blogs myself, so I don't feel owed anything.

But today's slang of the 1920s is dedicated to those crummy times when we don't get paid what's due to us or, even worse, must pay the price for someone else's folly.



~*~  LEFT HOLDING THE BAG  ~*~
Meaning: Getting the blame. / Being cheated out of your fair share.

"I didn't do it, I swear! Harvey killed 'im and left me holding the bag, that lousy rat!"

April 12, 2014

A to Z: The Ease of Expertise


Ignorance is not always bliss. So if you're first joining me here and still don't get what Blogging from A to Z is all about, it's time to get in the know: A to Z Challenge.

Now that you're informed and ready to proceed, allow me to further educate you on Roaring Twenties slang so you don't go into my debut novel blindly.



~*~  KNOW YOUR ONIONS  ~*~
Meaning: Know what's up. Know what you're doing/talking about.

"So then I says to him,
'Listen. The next time you check under my hood, you'd better know your onions.'"

--Gladys on persisting car troubles, but her innuendo helps her colleagues pass the workday.

April 10, 2014

A to Z: The Colder Shoulder


Welcome back to the April A to Z Challenge, where my blog shall not spurn your advances should you wish to shower it with comments--even if today's topic is devoted to the sad affair of unrequited love...

*sigh*

Like a fickle lover who dost not warm to your tender embrace, this next 1920s slang term only puckers its lips to deliver the kiss off.



~*~  ICY MITT  ~*~
Meaning: Rejection

"Blast you, temptress! I gave you my heart, only to receive the icy mitt."

April 7, 2014

A to Z: The Young and the Yawning


*yawn*
Hm? What? Oh sorry, I must have zoned out for a second there on this dull and dreary day. But that's not the right attitude, is it? We must have zest for life! Live like there's no tomorrow! That's the fun of a flapper, after all, so let's dance!

If you're scratching your head in a daze because you missed my original post about the A to Z Challenge, don't feel deflated. You can find it here:  A-Z, and all that jA-Zz

Meanwhile, the Devil is finding work for idle hands to do, so let's keep ourselves occupied brushing up on our 1920s slang:



~*~  FLAT TIRE  ~*~
Meaning: A bore

"Boy, this road trip sure became
a real flat tire once we got
that...flat tire."

April 5, 2014

A to Z: Tipsy from Your Tipple?


Why, hello, hellooo! Fancy meeting you here! If you've stumbled in here after-hours and are curious what this is all about, my explanation is at this link, if you can still read it through your beer goggles:  A-Z, and all that jA-Zz

And now, let us raise our drinks in toast to my next A to Z Challenge 1920s slang term, as well as the intoxicating debut novel that inspired this theme. Cheers!



~*~  EDGE  ~*~
Meaning: Intoxication, a buzz 

"Woo! I've got an edge from that gin fizz."

April 4, 2014

A to Z: You Snooze, You Lose

 
Rise and shine! Get outta bed, you lazy lunks--there's work to be done here! Language lessons to be learned!

If you missed my first post about the Blogging from A to Z Challenge and can't be bother to navigate back to it manually, I'll make it easier for you: A-Z, and all that jA-Zz

And now it's time to roll up your sleeves to take on a new 1920s slang term. This one appears in my contemporary/historical romance novel Seven for a Secret (due out in August), so stop dawdling,  you dandy, and get wise to the jive:



~*~  DEWDROPPER  ~*~
Meaning: An unemployed young man who lies around all day

"At least have the decency to remove your hat,
you idle dewdropper."

April 2, 2014

A to Z: The Bee's Knees She Ain't



Well, good morning, everyone! Welcome back to my humble abode, where by the end of the month, I hope to have you speaking in Twenties tongues.

In case you missed my original post about the Blogging from A to Z Challenge:





I now bring you the next installment of 1920s slang so you're hip to the jive by the time my 1920s novel Seven for a Secret come out. I will be the first to say that this one's rather mean, but it does appear in the book, so I'd be remiss not to help you translate:



~*~  BUG-EYED BETTY  ~*~
Meaning: An undesirable woman


"Fellas, just wait-n-see. 
I'm not the bug-eyed Betty I used to be."

March 29, 2014

A-Z, and all that jA-Zz

So...eight days later, I'm crawling to the doorsteps of the long-since abandoned Theme Reveal party, pathetically blowing on my kazoo to stir up some residual fanfare.

HELLO! Hello! Hello! goes the echo. Anyone? Anyone? Bueller? Bueller? 

Ah well, I'm still going to reveal my theme for the 2014 Blogging from A to Z Challenge, the topic that I shall be exploring through every letter of the alphabet for 26 days in April.

Ready? 

You sure? 

Okay then...

...wait for it...


~*~  1920s Slang  ~*~

Ta-da!!!


Disappointed? 

Tough tootsies.

This is so you'll be hip to the jive by the time SEVEN FOR A SECRET releases later this year (August 2014, Omnific Publishing). Up to the challenge? Then put your kale where your kisser is and meet me back here on April Fool's, when we'll flap our gums flapper-style.